not much is known about diya though she is the protagonist.she was fun loving, bold, practical,committed and very importantly simple and honest. her folks also had a simple mind and there was no dearth of love in her house.so trust naturally came to her. physical appearance was not on her check list and she didnt have any qualms about falling in love with sidharth.
sidharth -- how the name haunted her.
sid: happy bday diya.
diya: sid. dont call me. i told you am seeing someone else.
sid: i know. i hacked your ID and confirmed it. else i wouldnt have let you go. would have fought.
diya: you did what? are you crazy....
date: december 2007
arvind: diya, i want you to meet my friends..guys this is my girl - diya. aint she the most prettiest thing?
diya - stop it arvind. hi guys....
date : november 2006
diya: (cries) sid, i want a break.
sid: okay, lets talk about the fight later
diya: no sid! a break from US.
sid: whaaat? are you nuts?
diya: no sid. i cant take it anymore. your doubts, your dad's progressions, your spies and your hacking. its driving me nuts and i cant be with someone who doesnt trust me.
sid: ok
diya: okay??thats all. fine .bye
arvind - the second guy to win over diya. got to know her as his classmates bestfriend.and started off as friends. he started falling for her,until she opened out about sidharth. he was by her side as she dealt with her broken heart before even opening out about his love. a sportsperson, tall,fair with a boyish charm and outgoing. it seemed to him they were a good match.
diya was having a nice time with her new friend. their wavelengths matched and they were even completing each others sentence. she was trying to put aside her broken heart and move on. little did she know the disaster that was waiting to happen.
sid meanwhile completely broke down, and took to drinking,smoking,weed and girls. blaming it on diya he went through a phase of these before deciding to concentrate on his studies.
when arvind proposed, diya was hesitant.but after a long time, she accepted. but nothing was like what she had with sidharth. the one name that refuses to go away from her heart.
feb 2008
diya: hello?
sid: diya? its me.
diya's heart did a few somersaults. sid????
sid: how are you? long time huh? i heard you broke up with arvind!
diya: sid! lets not talk about anything personal.
sid: well, got placed?
diya: microsoft.
sid: oh same old IT company. i started my own company and sold it later for an awe-fucking some price, you should try booze. f*** its awesome.
diya: sid! since when did you start swearing. and whats with drinking?
................
diya - the one girl that lit up his life. how was she now? did she still think of him? sid couldnt sleep.
sidharth krishnan - is it the guy i loved? what has happened to him? who is this arrogant person?
diya couldnt sleep either.
she was mulling over arvind and sid as sleep overtook her with her 20 hour days at microsoft.
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Hey, i feel that you're slightly losing coherence here.. The previous parts were gripping and enjoyable... this one's a bit dull compared to the previous ones.. I'm not complaining though !! This is a gr8 story.. Waiting for the next part already ! :)
gripping cos it was just 2 characters. cant stop introducing the 3rd cos its a true story without any edits :P
@ganesh : filmi? maybe. fils are just from life :P aint it?
a very plausible scenario though the chronology gets me a bit confused at times...
keep going...
cheers
duno y am not losing the grip ... Actually finding it more interesting now ...eager ! U didnt lose ur grip in narration all through the seven parts ... Love that .. But try to get narration to its next level ! Gr8 goin so far ... Dont end it soon ... Drag drag drag :P add spices to the real story n make it long somehow ;)
I think i can guess the person on whom u have modelled sid,diya and arvind.....From the 7th part its lookin like a mani ratnam movie.....Make it fast paced and try to cut down on the flash backs.....
story la nalla oru twist vachurka...
good..
but this happens in all guys love..
have u ever heard the story in reverse !
improved a lot eagerness increased ..
@nirmala aunty - thanks aunty. will try to make sure its not confusing in the next parts.
@srivathsan - thanks :) its a real story so am not adding spices :) but ill make sure i write it in a way thats interesting
@narayanan - am not modelling it on anybody's work. thats just my way of writing. and flashbacks would be there,maybe i can minimise.
@fizal - thanks very much :)
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