Saturday, October 9, 2010

love story - II

date: the day diya finally saw "the" blog

diya and her cousin bharath were always more of friends than cousins. and he was the first one to know about the blog naturally.
bharath : diya....?
diya: huh?
bharath: do you realise your mouth is wide open like a cave ever since you opened this blog? ( evil laughter)
diya: huh?
bharath: oh god! stop staring at the monitor and look at me.
diya: i cant believe that guy!!! and to think everyone in our school knows about the blog and has read it. love is something private!
bharath: is that why you were so obssessed about the blog and the guy? whats his name anyway? suraj?
diya: sidharth!
bharath : (lol) whatever baby sister! hey look he has given his mail id! want me to act all macho and threaten him?
diya: you do something insane and i swear youll die.
bharath : so spoke juliet of the century! :P
diya - buzz off bro.

sidharthkrishnan@yahoo.co.nz ---diya kept battling in her heart. to mail or not to mail. but she did mail him.
she could sense the rish of blood fill her face, her trembling fingers, the fast beats of her heart. all logic asking her not to mail, but her heart wanting to! why am i acting nuts? she would have asked this infinite times to her dog dushew~

"send" - "click" - diya couldnt stop gushing. now she couldnt wait for a reply. the next couple of months just rushed past with board exams and results and college applications.

at the corner of her heart - she knew she was waiting for a reply. who was this guy? whats he done to me? what am i feeling for this guy? how can i like him without even knowing him.

some passerby : hey diya, looking beautiful
diya : thanks. ( well sidharthkrishnan, that was a start)

date: 10 oct 2010



diya's room mate and best friend madhumitha comes to wake her up and sees her crying. being best friends for a long time, she doesnt need diya to tell what was wrong.

sweetie, come on now! things will be alright!


diya: (wry smile) ya sure! give me 10 minutes. let me get ready.

"
what did you do these 4 years? just loved??? did you atleast do something useful with your life diya? did you? did you?" diya wiper her eyes and walked away as madhu looked on worried.

6 comments:

Harris said...

i lik siddarth's start ! really
innum u could've concentrated more on it! !
hmmmmm seems to be some own experience!! :P
good one!!

sowmya said...

will talk about sidharth in the 3rd part :) thanks for the suggestion. and the last sentence. no comments! am n the story but which character nu not telling! there are many characters in the story

kaushik said...

nice read.. wiating for part 3 :)

lmohamedfaizal said...

good navigation...tempting to read more..

periya director ah varuva pola..

Unknown said...

like the way the story is progressing but wanna read more than just the mail episode! write more in the single part, as to describing the room what is the economic status,describe the character of madumita
but good effort! but waiting to read other parts!

crazy virgo said...

hey this is wonderful :) am enjoying it